tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9016603191533255832.post6034010988537201573..comments2024-01-02T22:46:29.288-05:00Comments on Musings: Thoreau Meets BashoJoyce Rayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02905709719444916488noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9016603191533255832.post-73283695213027484152011-04-16T12:56:21.098-04:002011-04-16T12:56:21.098-04:00Thanks for your comments, Robyn and Andromeda. Sou...Thanks for your comments, Robyn and Andromeda. Sounds like you've written lots of haibun, Andromeda. I'm just beginning, really. I have another about my experience with the Japanese tea ceremony. But I want to explore this form some more. I really like the challenge of wrapping up one's experience with lines that keep the feeling moving forward rather than summarizing it. At least, that's what I'm getting from my haibun reading.Joyce Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02905709719444916488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9016603191533255832.post-16683024051780646092011-04-15T20:11:15.992-04:002011-04-15T20:11:15.992-04:00I love how you have brought Thoreau together with ...I love how you have brought Thoreau together with Basho! What a great combo. Your haibun is quite lovely too. I have been exploring the form this month, writing a haibun every day. I expect to get a better grasp of the way the parts work together by the end of the month. I'm struggling with the prose part currently; not sure how objective or direct I want to be. Trying to keep it all specific, in the moment, and sharp. Have you written more haibun?Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9016603191533255832.post-15782886358607999522011-04-15T20:09:18.633-04:002011-04-15T20:09:18.633-04:00Love thinking about the different approaches of th...Love thinking about the different approaches of these two masters- thanks for sharing. And I can smell that sharp/sweet pine from here!Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.com